What do you think should be done to improve living conditions in cities?
학생이 쓴 원문
It needs more park in the city. If trees are increased, we will have a fresh air.
Also building must be lower. If we can the sky anywhere, it makes us feel calmer.
Many people have to walk with decreasing cars.
Though we have some inconvenience, we have to put up with it for the future.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Indeed you are right!
Until the next one!
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~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>Parks are more needed in the city.
If trees are increased, we will have a fresh air.
>>CORRECT
Also building must be lower.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They must lower the buildings.
If we can the sky anywhere, it makes us feel calmer.
>>If we can see the sky anywhere, it makes us feel calmer.
Many people have to walk with decreasing cars.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Many people have to walk with slowing cars.
Though we have some inconvenience, we have to put up with it for the future.
>>Though we have some inconveniences, we have to put up with it for the future.
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