What do you think should be done to improve living conditions in cities?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hi there!
I feel drowsy after eating. I want to sleep early.
Homework: What do you think should be done to improve living conditions in cities?
I will plant an tree. The city needs many tree. Because city\'s air condition is bad.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Why do you feel drowsy? Maybe it\'s because of the weather. I heard it\'s really cold now in South Korea.
Until the next one! :)
See you in our class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
I feel drowsy after eating.
>>CORRECT
I want to sleep early.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
I will plant an tree.
>>I will plant a tree.
The city needs many tree.
>>The city needs many trees.
Because city\'s air condition is bad.
>>Because, the city\'s air condition is bad.
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