What do you think should be done to people caught using or selling illegal drugs?
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If people want to sell or buy some drugs, if it is illegal, they should stop doing. Whatever they want, illegal is not good for them and other people. Government should catch them and do something right thing.
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If people want to sell or buy some drugs, if it is illegal, they should stop doing.
>> Drug pushers and users should stop selling and buying, respectively.
Whatever they want, illegal is not good for them and other people.
>> Drug trafficking is not beneficial to the general public and can even destroy a nation.
Government should catch them and do something right thing.
>> The government should catch them and do the right thing.
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