What do you think should the government about the homeless people on the streets?

2021-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think government has to provide temporary shelters. Because they can carry disease. And they are also vulnerable to various disasters.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

There’s never a good time to lack shelter, but the return of cold weather presents particular challenges for people experiencing homelessness. The sight of someone on the street in fall and winter compels us to make an effort to help. But it can be difficult to know how to make the greatest impact. Your suggestion is great!

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I think government has to provide temporary shelters. Because they can carry disease.

>> I think government has to provide temporary shelters because they can carry disease.

And they are also vulnerable to various disasters.

>> CORRECT

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