What do you think should the government do about homeless people?
학생이 쓴 원문
About homeless people which have a reason, the government should support them. It can make a law. And basically, it should provide something to eat. Finally, it can make environment which they can work. If  it does its best to do these, clearly, they will be able to live in the better society. I hope the society which we can live together. To make dreams come true, people and government should make effort together.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
This is a good idea. Maybe this can be a great impact for them to get back on their feet and make their lives better.
About homeless people which have a reason, the government should support them.
>> For homeless people who have valid reasons, the government should support them.
It can make a law.
>> They can make a law regarding this.
And basically, it should provide something to eat.
>> Basically, they should provide something for them to eat.
Finally, it can make environment which they can work.
>> Finally, they should make places where they can work.
If  it does its best to do these, clearly, they will be able to live in the better society.
>> If it\'s the best to do these things, clearly, they will be able to live in the society better.
I hope the society which we can live together.
>> I hope for a society which everyone can live together peacefully.
To make dreams come true, people and government should make effort together
>> To make dreams come true, people and the government should make efforts together.
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