What do you think should the government do regarding the air pollution in South Korea? Explain your
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In my opinion, the government of South Korea should notify the air situations of here to the world.
It is hard to reduce the air pollution by ourselves because the biggest cause of the air pollution is China.
But if we speak about the situation of South Korea, then it could make worse situations.
Because of these reasons, I think we need to notify these situations to the world.
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It is hard to reduce the air pollution by ourselves because the biggest cause of the air pollution is China.
But if we speak about the situation of South Korea, then it could make worse situations.
Because of these reasons, I think we need to notify these situations to the world.
Those are great ideas!
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
In my opinion, the government of South Korea should notify the air situations of here to the world.
>> In my opinion, the government of South Korea should notify the world about this situation.
It is hard to reduce the air pollution by ourselves because the biggest cause of the air pollution is China.
>> CORRECT
But if we speak about the situation of South Korea, then it could make worse situations.
>> But if we speak about the situation of South Korea, there\'s a possibility that it can make situations worse.
Because of these reasons, I think we need to notify these situations to the world.
>> CORRECT
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