What do you think should the government of South Korea focus on?

I think nowadays, the goverment of South Korea is so much focusing on the education. In the South Korea, a lot of people including students and parents are so much focusing on the education. They think study is the only way that we can succeed, and they don\'t look at different ways. They think the right way is study, but I think its not true. Yea, a lot of people who learned and know a lot of knowledge succeeded very easly. But they know only important knowledge, and they succeded, but we are trying to study more. We need just few knowledge, not the all knowledge that human knows. So I think goverment of South Korea has to focus to the education that study is not the all of our entire life. If it does it, a lot of people will get a lot of jobs, and the economy of the South Korea will be improved.

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Governments in emerging economies have, over the decades, tried many different policy agendas to stimulate development, accelerate growth, alleviate poverty, and achieve any number of other goals to mixed success. Nowadays, the urgent problem is regarding the pandemic. They work really hard on how to improve their country and their people as well. Your ideas are great. Thanks for sharing. :) 

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