What do you think should the government of South Korea focus on?
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What do you think should the government of South Korea focus on?
I think that our government of South Korea focus on vaccine supply.
Our country still has a lot of confirmed cases of COVID-19.
Many people want to get a vaccine and a travel aboard recovery is starting.
I also hope to travel without worry.
The governemnt is extpecting that most people are getting a vaccine later this year.
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I think that our government of South Korea focus on vaccine supply.
>> I think that the government of South Korea should focus on the vaccine supply.
Our country still has a lot of confirmed cases of COVID-19.
>> CORRECT
Many people want to get a vaccine and a travel aboard recovery is starting.
>> Many people want to get the vaccine and travel abroad.
I also hope to travel without worry.
>> CORRECT
The governemnt is extpecting that most people are getting a vaccine later this year.
The governemnt is extpecting that most people are getting a vaccine later this year.
>> The government is expecting that most people will get the vaccine later this year.
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