What do you think the advantage and disadvantage of state and private school are?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]nah!
T[이름]k you for sharing your thoughts and opinion in answering your homework question.
I think it is nice that we bring our children to private schools in order for them to have a holistic learning. In our country, there are lots of private schools.
If we want to bring our children to public schools. They should have high grades in order for them to go to the science class of the school. In that class, they are able to learn in advance. But if they will be put into the regular class of a public school I think they will not be able to learn a lot. That is my own opinion with regards to the educational system of our country.
-Teacher Shelly-
I like this topic because it is a aducation area.
>>> I like this topic because it talks about education.
These days many US patents want to do private school systems.
>>> These days U.S. parents want to bring their children to private schools.
You know why, public schools gun fires several times .
>>> Public schools in the U.S. have several gun fires.
It was tragic.
>>> Correct!
Most private school bottom line have religions .
>>> Most private schools have religious concepts.
Of course US are Christian country.
>>> U.S. is a Christian country.
These are a big reason for parents choosing at private school.
>>> This is the real reason why parents choose private schools.
I like private school new curriculum that title is a steam.
>>> I like the new curriculum of private schools and the name is \"STEAM\"
many schools already started this programs.
>>> Many schools already started this program.
They are preparing 21st century.
>>>They are preparing for the 21sy century.
Before program was only stem but now added art.
>>> Before, the program\'s name is only \"STEM\" but now they added art.
Also most teachers are over qualified their careers.
>>> Also, most teachers are overqualified for their careers.
most private school students numbers are smaller t[이름] public school.
>>> The numbers of students in most private schools are getting smaller and smaller compared to private schools.
Sometimes they have better c[이름]ce but that means less competition.
>>> Sometimes they have better c[이름]ces, it also mean there will be lesser competition.
When they go to the college it might be different stories.
>>> When they go to college it might be a different story.
It is hard for them.
>>> It will be hard for them.
I think life is always both side looks like coin.
>>> I think, in life, we should always look on both sides of the coin.
If they can control both side well life is good enough.
>>>If they can control both side, well life will be good enough.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.