What do you think the punishment for drunk driving should be?

2023-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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In Korea, punishment is so weak to drunk driving person. They are tolling on an irrelevant person. I’m not sure, punishment for attacker is canceling a drive license or paying compensation to unrelated person. I don’t know well. But l know the other country‘s punishment. Car that attackers drive being marked at their car’s number. Because, Other people, they have a right to knowing for situations at drive moments. Absolutely, I think that punishment should more strengthen to the people.

강사 첨삭

Hello Su,

Thank you for completing your homework. Your effort and dedication really shine through, and I\'m glad to see you putting in such good work. I also read your thoughts on punishments for certain behaviors in different countries. It\'s interesting to see the differences and similarities. Your observations show a thoughtful perspective on the topic. Keep up the great work! Your engagement in the subject matter is truly appreciated.

~Teacher Cathy

 

In Korea, punishment is so weak to drunk driving person.

>>In Korea, punishment is so weak for a drunk-driving person.

OR>> In Korea, the penalties for driving under the influence are quite mild.

They are tolling on an irrelevant person.

>>CORRECT

OR>>They\'re tolling on unimportant people.

I’m not sure, punishment for attacker is canceling a drive license or paying

compensation to unrelated person.

>>I’m not sure, the punishment for an attacker is canceling a driver\'s license or paying compensation to an unrelated person.

I don’t know well. But l know the other country‘s punishment.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I\'m not very familiar about it but I know the other country\'s punishment.

Car that attackers drive being marked at their car’s number.

>>A car that attackers drive is marked at their car\'s number.

OR>> The number on the attacker\'s car helps figure out which car it is.

Because, Other people, they have a right to knowing for situations at drive moments.

>> Because other people have the right to know about situations during driving moments.

Absolutely, I think that punishment should more strengthen to the people.

>>Absolutely, I think that punishment should be stricter for people.

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