What do you think the punishment for drunk driving should be?
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Hello Su,
Thank you for completing your homework. Your effort and dedication really shine through, and I\'m glad to see you putting in such good work. I also read your thoughts on punishments for certain behaviors in different countries. It\'s interesting to see the differences and similarities. Your observations show a thoughtful perspective on the topic. Keep up the great work! Your engagement in the subject matter is truly appreciated.
~Teacher Cathy
In Korea, punishment is so weak to drunk driving person.
>>In Korea, punishment is so weak for a drunk-driving person.
OR>> In Korea, the penalties for driving under the influence are quite mild.
They are tolling on an irrelevant person.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They\'re tolling on unimportant people.
I’m not sure, punishment for attacker is canceling a drive license or paying
compensation to unrelated person.
>>I’m not sure, the punishment for an attacker is canceling a driver\'s license or paying compensation to an unrelated person.
I don’t know well. But l know the other country‘s punishment.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m not very familiar about it but I know the other country\'s punishment.
Car that attackers drive being marked at their car’s number.
>>A car that attackers drive is marked at their car\'s number.
OR>> The number on the attacker\'s car helps figure out which car it is.
Because, Other people, they have a right to knowing for situations at drive moments.
>> Because other people have the right to know about situations during driving moments.
Absolutely, I think that punishment should more strengthen to the people.
>>Absolutely, I think that punishment should be stricter for people.
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