What do you think the world would be like without music?
학생이 쓴 원문
If the world doesn\'t have music many kind of beautiful have been going lose.
1.Bautiful sound is more connective people emotion each others.
2.
강사 첨삭
Hi Hansel/Hanz! Thank you for completing your homework. I agree with your answer. I think that music has the power to convey emotions that people can relate to even when they speak different languages. ~~T.Dee
If the world doesn\'t have music many kind of beautiful have been going lose.
>>If the world doesn\'t have any music, many things that are beautiful will also be gone.
Bautiful sound is more connective people emotion each others.
>>Beautiful melody makes people\'s emotion connect with each other.
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