What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city?
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A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why?
If a person I know is planning to move to my town, I would like about it. And I think that he(or she) would like about it.
Because, I think we can talk a lot and he(or she) can adapt quickly to my town.
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Good evening, Gerrard!^^
I appreciate your time in doing your homework. Great job!^_^
If a person I know is planning to move to my town, I would like about it.
>>> If a person I know is planning to move to my town, I would like it.
And I think that he(or she) would like about it.
>>> And I think he or she would like my town.
Because, I think we can talk a lot and he(or she) can adapt quickly to my town.
>>> It\'s because I think we can talk a lot and he or she can adapt quickly in my town.
>>> It\'s because I can share a lot of things about my town and he or she can adapt quickly.
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