What do you think was the most important invention in history?
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What do you think was the most important invention in history?
I think that the most important invention is electricity of Edison.
Due to electricity, our lives have become more comfortable.
We can\'t never imagine something, our future is waiting awsome things.
I look forward to more developed further our futuure,
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Hi [이름]! All inventions serve a purpose to everyone. They are made to make our lives more convenient although there are some that stand out to us the most. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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Due to electricity, our lives have become more comfortable.
We can\'t never imagine something, our future is waiting awsome things.
I look forward to more developed further our futuure,
I think that the most important invention is electricity of Edison.
>>I think that the most important invention is electricity by Thomas Edison.
Due to electricity, our lives have become more comfortable.
>> CORRECT
We can\'t never imagine something, our future is waiting awsome things.
>>We can never imagine our lives without it. Our future is waiting awesome things.
I look forward to more developed further our futuure,
>>I look forward to more developed inventions in the future,
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