What do you think when you see a pregnant woman smoking? Do you think smoking will ever disappear?

2014-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am a very strong believer in not judging a book by its cover. However, when they are putting the health of their unborn child at risk then how you cannot judge. Whatever their reasons are, it is not justifiable to smoke after getting pregnant. From my knowledge, it is totally unacceptable and I cannot understand the pregnant women smoking. Some women say that it’s better to cut down rather than being stressed for quitting smoking. They believe that not every problem is caused by smoking. I do not think that smoking will eventually disappear completely on the glove although the population of smokers will be declining gradually thanks to various efforts by the governments and civic groups. People are becoming more conscious of the health risks associated with smoking and many regulations are introduced and enacted to ban smoking. In addition the governments are making many attempts to deter children from taking up the habit. But, prostitution, drinking, drug, and smoking won't die.

강사 첨삭

Good day SIr [이름] ^^ Happy second day of the week. ^^ Me too! I don\'t understand why some pregnant women smoke. Maybe they are facing some problems that they can\'t express. I don\'t really know what are their reasons but maybe that is the only way for them to release it. Thanks for your ideas and effort today. Talk to you soon. Teacher Nina   I am a very strong believer in not judging a book by its cover. >> Correct >> OR: I am a very strong believer in the saying, \" Don\'t judge a book by its cover\". However, when they are putting the health of their unborn child at risk then how you cannot judge. >> Correct Whatever their reasons are, it is not justifiable to smoke after getting pregnant. >> Correct >> OR: Whatever their reasons are, it it not reasonable to smoke when you are pregnant. From my knowledge, it is totally unacceptable and I cannot understand the pregnant women smoking. >> From my knowledge, it is totally unacceptable and I cannot understand why the pregnant women are smoking. >> OR: From my knowledge, it is totally unacceptable and I can\'t understand why pregnant women smoke. Some women say that it’s better to cut down rather than being stressed for quitting smoking. >> Correct They believe that not every problem is caused by smoking. >> Correct I do not think that smoking will eventually disappear completely on the glove although the population of smokers will be declining gradually thanks to various efforts by the governments and civic groups. >> Correct People are becoming more conscious of the health risks associated with smoking and many regulations are introduced and enacted to ban smoking. >> Correct In addition the governments are making many attempts to deter children from taking up the habit. >> Correct But, prostitution, drinking, drug, and smoking won\'t die. >> Correct

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