What do you think will be the implication if spending on eating out will continue to increase?
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I think money is very important factor to live because we can buy everything to spend money.
We earn through the work but the salary is limited. So we should spend within budget.
We usually spend money about food, clothing, and shelter.
If spending on eating out will continue to increase, we should reduce other spending because the budget is limited.
Also, if we reduce other spending, the total consumption will be reduced and the economy is also affected.The economy of country will be worse.
Thus, it is important to maintain price.
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I think money is very important factor to live because we can buy everything to spend money. We earn through the work but the salary is limited. So we should spend within budget.
>>I think money is a very important factor to live because we can buy everything by spending money. We earn by working but the salary is limited. So, we should spend within the budget.
We usually spend money about food, clothing, and shelter. If spending on eating out will continue to increase, we should reduce other spending because the budget is limited.
>>We usually spend money on food, clothing, and shelter. If spending on eating out will continue to increase, we should reduce other spending because the budget is limited.
Also, if we reduce other spending, the total consumption will be reduced and the economy is also affected.The economy of country will be worse. Thus, it is important to maintain price.
>>Also, if we reduce other spending, the total consumption will be reduced and the economy is also affected.The economy of the country will be worse. Thus, it is important to maintain good price.
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