What do you think will be the next big breakthrough in transportation?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are so many means of transportation in the world.
There are many kinds of personal transportation such as bicycles, scooters, motorbikes and there are also many modes of public transportation such as taxi, express bus, train, ship, airplane.
The next expected means of transportation is likely to be a drone.
Drones are already used in various fields. It is used in agriculture, logistics and so on. The 6G era is coming soon, and I think drones carrying people will appear at that time.
Of course, It is very scary to think of the terrible situation in which a drone that suddenly broke down in the sky falls in the middle of the city.
However, I think experts are fully considering the moving drones only able to fly where there are no people. Maybe it’s only available to people who have undergone rigorous testing.
I hope there are no victims of drone.
강사 첨삭
Thanks again for this one Philip.
There are so many means of transportation in the world.
>>> correct
There are many kinds of personal transportation such as bicycles, scooters, motorbikes and there are also many modes of public transportation such as taxi, express bus, train, ship, airplane.
>>> correct
The next expected means of transportation is likely to be a drone.
>>> correct
Drones are already used in various fields.
>>> correct
There are many kinds of personal transportation such as bicycles, scooters, motorbikes and there are also many modes of public transportation such as taxi, express bus, train, ship, airplane.
>>> correct
The next expected means of transportation is likely to be a drone.
>>> correct
Drones are already used in various fields.
>>> correct
It is used in agriculture, logistics and so on.
>>> correct
The 6G era is coming soon, and I think drones carrying people will appear at that time.
>>> correct
Of course, It is very scary to think of the terrible situation in which a drone that suddenly broke down in the sky falls in the middle of the city.
>>> Of course, it is very scary to think of the terrible situation where/in which a drone suddenly breaks down in the sky and falls in the middle of the city.
>>> correct
Of course, It is very scary to think of the terrible situation in which a drone that suddenly broke down in the sky falls in the middle of the city.
>>> Of course, it is very scary to think of the terrible situation where/in which a drone suddenly breaks down in the sky and falls in the middle of the city.
However, I think experts are fully considering the moving drones only able to fly where there are no people.
>>> However, I think experts are fully considering the moving drones would only be able to fly where there are no people.
>>> However, I think experts are fully considering the moving drones would only be able to fly where there are no people.
Maybe it’s only available to people who have undergone rigorous testing.
>>> correct
I hope there are no victims of drone.
>>> OR: I hope there are no victims of drone accidents.
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