What do you think will be the repercussions(effect or result) of North Korea's missile launch?
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What happen if the north korea launch a missile?
It is a declaration of war that north korea's missile is throwed to other country.
If it is happened, not only the war of two country but also any other country will attend the war.
So many people will die and the world will suffer a tremendous loss.
My families are separated and my families are die and my home is broken.
If north korea launch a missile to other country all these can be happened.
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What happen if the north korea launch a missile?>>What will happen if North Korea will launch a missile?
It is a declaration of war that north korea\'s missile is throwed to other country.
>>It is a declaration of war if North Korea\'s missile is thrown to another country.If it is happened, not only the war of two country but also any other country will attend the war.
>>If this happened, not only will it be a war of two countries but also other countries will be joining the war.So many people will die and the world will suffer a tremendous loss.
>>CORRECT!
>>So a lot of people will die and the world will suffer a big loss.My families are separated and my families are die and my home is broken.
>>Families will be separated, family members will die and homes will be broken.If north korea launch a missile to other country all these can be happened.
>>If North Korea will launch a missile to another country, all these could happen.
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