What do you think will happen if North Korea and South Korea are as one again?
학생이 쓴 원문
If North Korea and South Korea are as one again, Korea can be a more powerful country than before.
In North Korea, there are many natural resources and South Korea has improved technologies.
Also we can go to Europe starting from South Korea.
So many countries will trade at the end of South Korea.
So I think if North Korea and South Korea are as one again, Korea can be a more powerful country than before.
강사 첨삭
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I also hope that North Korea and South Korea would unite as well.
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If North Korea and South Korea are as one again, Korea can be a more powerful country than before.
>> If North Korea and South Korea are as one again, Korea can be more powerful than before.
>> In North Korea, there are many natural resources and in South Korea, technologies have improved.
Also we can go to Europe starting from South Korea.
>> Also, we can go to Europe starting from South Korea.
So many countries will trade at the end of South Korea.
>> So many countries will trade at the end of South Korea.
So I think if North Korea and South Korea are as one again, Korea can be a more powerful country than before.
>> So, I think that if North Korea and South Korea are as one again, Korea can be more powerful than before.
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