What do you think will happen if North Korea and South Korea are as one again?
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What do you think will happen if North Korea and South Korea are as one again?
I think it will become a stronger country than now.
It is impossible the current situation because it is many differences between North and South Korea now.
But I think that the two nations will be unified in the distant future.
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I hope that the two countries would unite as one as well. There would be advantages and disadvantages along with it if so.
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I think it will become a stronger country than now.
>>I think our country would become stronger than now.
It is impossible the current situation because it is many differences between North and South Korea now.
>> It is impossible in our current situation because of the differences of North and South Korea.
But I think that the two nations will be unified in the distant future.
>> CORRECT
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