What do you think will happen if the rail strike issue will not be resolved?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the rail strike issue will be resolved because this issue is occurred every year and was always resolved.
However, if the rail strike issue will not be resolved, we will be damaged.
First, we are difficult to use the train because the train\'s run will decrease. The labors don\'t work during this period, so the train company named Korail can\'t run the train service.
Also, Korail have subway line, so subways also will decrease. Because of lack of the labors, we will suffer the inconvenience.
강사 첨삭
Hi Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I think the rail strike issue will be resolved because this issue is occurred every year and was always resolved.
>>I think the rail strike issue will be resolved because this issue was occurred every year and was always resolved.
However, if the rail strike issue will not be resolved, we will be damaged. First, we are difficult to use the train because the train\'s run will decrease.
>>However, if the rail strike issue will not be resolved, we will be damaged. First, it is difficult to use the train because the train\'s speed will decrease.
The labors don\'t work during this period, so the train company named Korail can\'t run the train service. Also, Korail have subway line, so subways also will decrease. Because of lack of the labors, we will suffer the inconvenience.
>>The laborers don\'t work during this period, so, the train company named Korail can\'t run the train service. Also, Korail have subway lines, so, subways also will decrease. Because of lack of the laborers, we will suffer the inconveniences.
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