What do you think will happen if we lived in a world without animals?
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I think there will be more people with depression in the world. It\'s inevitable that there will be fewer people to love or communicate with. Also, animals are the ones who comfort and comfort you when you\'re tired.
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They play a very important role in our lives. I think we can\'t survive without them.
I think there will be more people with depression in the world.
>> CORRECT
It\'s inevitable that there will be fewer people to love or communicate with.
>> CORRECT
Also, animals are the ones who comfort and comfort you when you\'re tired.
>> Also, animals are the ones who comfort us when we are tired.
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