What do you think will happen if we lived in a world without animals? Explain your answer.
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I don\'t know about the other people whether they will say that it is good or bad, but for me, it will be terrible.
If we need to live without the animals, that means that we are not able to eat some meats.
But my favorite dishes are all made from the meats.
So for me, I think it is impossible to live without the animals.
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They play a very important role in our lives. I think we can\'t survive without them.
I don\'t know about the other people whether they will say that it is good or bad, but for me, it will be terrible.
>> COI don\'t know about the other people whether they will say that it is good or bad, but for me it will be terrible.
If we need to live without the animals, that means that we are not able to eat some meats.
>> If we need to live without the animals, that means that we will not be able to eat meat.
But my favorite dishes are all made from the meats.
>> But all my favorite dishes have meat in it.
>> But all my favorite dishes have meat in it.
So for me, I think it is impossible to live without the animals.
>> CORRECT
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