What do you think will happen if your country falls into a recession due to the continuous inflation
학생이 쓴 원문
Inflation causes lots of changes. First of all, the price of goods is increased and the value of currency is decreased. On the other hand, the value of real estate is increased. So, people try to buy real estate rather than saving money in bank. As a result, the bank of Korea make the interest rate increased to induce people to save money. And then, the price of real estate also become decreased. Especially, the key currency country, America increasing the interest rate because of recession. After that, lots of dollars in Korea flew out to America and lots of professionals worry about the second IMF. Because of recession, people have trouble earning a living. It is also hard to export goods due to the war between Russia and Ukraine and covid-19. So, there will be lots of companies in financial difficulties. Like this, there are so many correlations in economy, We have to maintain stabilization of price.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Mary!
Inflation causes lots of changes.
>>> correct
First of all, the price of goods is increased and the value of currency is decreased.
>>> correct
On the other hand, the value of real estate is increased.
>>> correct
So, people try to buy real estate rather than saving money in bank.
>>> correct
As a result, the bank of Korea make the interest rate increased to induce people to save money.
>>> OR: As a result, the bank of Korea increased the interest rate to encourage people to save money.
And then, the price of real estate also become decreased.
>>> OR: Then, the price of real estate also decreased.
Especially, the key currency country, America increasing the interest rate because of recession.
>>> Especially, as the key currency country, America increased the interest rate because of recession.
After that, lots of dollars in Korea flew out to America and lots of professionals worry about the second IMF.
>>> correct
Because of recession, people have trouble earning a living.
>>> Because of recession, people have trouble earning for a living.
It is also hard to export goods due to the war between Russia and Ukraine and covid-19.
>>> correct
So, there will be lots of companies in financial difficulties.
>>> correct
Like this, there are so many correlations in economy.
>>> correct
We have to maintain stabilization of price.
>>> correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.