What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?
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The overpopulation causes quite serious problem in my country. although the phenomenon of food-lack as Malthus predicted does not happen, the increase of population would make it worse the condition of life such as environment, housing, transportation and so on. To surmise, I believe that overpopulation might result in the decrease of life-quality.
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Hi [이름]! I agree with you. The quality of live overall would be affected. That\'s why the government should take notice of the inflation of population in their country. :)
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The overpopulation causes quite serious problem in my country.
>> Overpopulation causes serious problems in a country.
although the phenomenon of food-lack as Malthus predicted does not happen, the increase of population would make it worse the condition of life such as environment, housing, transportation and so on.
>> Although the phenomenon of food-lack like what Thomas Malthus, a famous economist, predicted will not happen. Ihe increase of population would make the condition of life worse in terms of the environment, housing, transportation and so on.
To surmise, I believe that overpopulation might result in the decrease of life-quality.
>> To summarize, I believe that overpopulation might result in the decrease of life-quality.
>> To summarize, I believe that overpopulation might result in the decrease of life-quality.
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