What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?
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What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?
I think that nothing will happen overpopulated for the present.
Nowdays, the population of world is decreasing.
That why our country is encouraged to have a child.
But if our country is overpopulated, our goverment needs brith control policy which our country implemented in the 1970s.
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Hi [이름]! The quality of live overall would be affected if overpopulations is present. That\'s why the government should take notice of the inflation of population in their country. :)
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I think that nothing will happen overpopulated for the present.
That why our country is encouraged to have a child.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!
I think that nothing will happen overpopulated for the present.
>> I think that nothing will happen overpopulated is present.
Nowadays, the population of world is decreasing.
>> CORRECT
That why our country is encouraged to have a child.
>>This is why our country is encouraging citizens to have children.
But if our country is overpopulated, our goverment needs brith control policy which our country implemented in the 1970s.
>> If our country is overpopulated, our government needs bring back the birth control policy which our country implemented in the 1970s.
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