What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?
학생이 쓴 원문
If our country become overpopulated, I think many thing will change. There will be prons and cons but I think it not that bad. Maybe there will many people to work and helpful fo country so I think it can be good.
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Hi [이름]! This is true. There would be a lot of pros and cons but it depends on the government on how they\'re going to handle it.
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If our country become overpopulated, I think many thing will change.
>> If our country would become overpopulated, a lot of things will change.
There will be prons and cons but I think it not that bad.
>> There would be pros and cons but I think it won\'t be that severe.
Maybe there will many people to work and helpful fo country so I think it can be good.
>> Maybe there would be more people working so it\'s beneficial to the economy, which is a good thing.
>> Maybe there would be more people working so it\'s beneficial to the economy, which is a good thing.
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