What do you think will happen if your customs and traditions will be totally gone?
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I think it would be kinda sad.
Because firstly, if there wasn\'t it would feel like every country is the same or something.
And there would be no special holidays.
It would be kinda boring to visit other countries.
No traditional foods and costumes too.
So I think it would be bad for almost everyone :(
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What do you think will happen if your customs and traditions will be totally gone?
I think it would be kinda sad.
Because firstly, if there wasn\'t it would feel like every country is the same or something. And there would be no special holidays.
Because firstly, if there wasn\'t it would feel like every country is the same or something. And there would be no special holidays.
>>> I think it will be sad because without it then each country will just be the same. There would be no special holidays and relaxing day-offs.
It would be kinda boring to visit other countries.
>>> It would be boring to visit other countries.
OR: It will be boring for the citizens in that country and same with the tourist.
No traditional foods and costumes too.
>>> CORRECT
OR: There will be no traditional foods and costumes too.
So I think it would be bad for almost everyone.
>>> CORRECT
OR: So I think it would be bad for almost everyone if holidays will be gone.
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