What do you think will you be doing five years from now?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s great to make an imagination about future. In my case, after five years, I will be rich. Surely, I will have an extra job with a main job. I will make a big money and travel many countries.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! I can completely relate to you. I mean, who doesn\'t want to be rich? I\'m rooting for you!
-T. Sonny
It\'s great to make an imagination about future.
>>It\'s thrilling to imagine about the future.
In my case, after five years, I will be rich.
In my case, after five years, I will be rich.
>>As for me, I\'d be rich five years later.
Surely, I will have an extra job with a main job.
Surely, I will have an extra job with a main job.
>>Without a doubt, I\'d have a main job and an extra job.
I will make a big money and travel many countries.
>>I\'d make a lot of money and travel to many countries.
>>I\'d make a lot of money and travel to many countries.
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