What do you think would animals say about humans if they could make a documentary movie about humans
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Animals like pigs and cows criticize humans because we slaughter and eat them.
And animals in zoo might not like us because they want to go wild.
Lastly, beloved pets would make a documentary movie that they are looked after in.
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And animals in zoo might not like us because they want to go wild.
Lastly, beloved pets would make a documentary movie that they are looked after in.
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Animals like pigs and cows criticize humans because we slaughter and eat them.
>> CORRECT!
And animals in zoo might not like us because they want to go wild.
>> And animals in the zoo might not like us because they want to go back to the wild.
Lastly, beloved pets would make a documentary movie that they are looked after in.
>> Lastly, pets would make a documentary movie bout how we look after them.
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