What do you think would be the benefit of having a big family?
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Thank you so much for your composition.
I agree with you. I learned a lot from my grandparents as well.
I can say that it is fun to have a big family.
However, when organizing parties is very difficult.
It is because you have to talk to all of them.
Have a great day. ^^ See you in class Sir [이름]. ^^
Teacher Nina
In the old days before industrialization, we used to have a big family.
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When society relied on agriculture, a lot of labor was required, so that a family became bigger.
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Even when I was a kid, I lived with my grandparents and my whole family engaged in farming.
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Having a big family has upsides and downsides.
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Children can learn from their grandparents such as respecting the elderly, how to behave, cooperation with others, conceding to others, etc.
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We can be supportive each other when a difficult thing occurs.
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We can share the joy and pain of the other family members.
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We can naturally learn what my role and duty are in the family.
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We feel like we are much securer with a large family.
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There are negative aspects of having a big family.
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Like a proverb saying a mother with a large brood never has a peaceful day, something will happen almost every day.
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There will be a lot of conflicts.
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Especially if you have to live with your mother-in-law, the tension, disputes, or arguments will be prevalent.
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