What do you think would be the benefit of having a big family?

2016-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In the old days before industrialization, we used to have a big family. When society relied on agriculture, a lot of labor was required, so that a family became bigger. Even when I was a kid, I lived with my grandparents and my whole family engaged in farming.Having a big family has upsides and downsides.Children can learn from their grandparents such as respecting the elderly, how to behave, cooperation with others, conceding to others, etc. We can be supportive each other when a difficult thing occurs. We can share the joy and pain of the other family members. We can naturally learn what my role and duty are in the family. We feel like we are much securer with a large family. There are negative aspects of having a big family. Like a proverb saying a mother with a large brood never has a peaceful day, something will happen almost every day. There will be a lot of conflicts. Especially if you have to live with your mother-in-law, the tension, disputes, or arguments will be prevalent.

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much for your composition.

I agree with you. I learned a lot from my grandparents as well.

I can say that it is fun to have a big family.

However, when organizing parties is very difficult.

It is because you have to talk to all of them.

Have a great day. ^^ See you in class Sir [이름]. ^^

Teacher Nina


In the old days before industrialization, we used to have a big family.

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When society relied on agriculture, a lot of labor was required, so that a family became bigger.

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Even when I was a kid, I lived with my grandparents and my whole family engaged in farming.

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Having a big family has upsides and downsides.

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Children can learn from their grandparents such as respecting the elderly, how to behave, cooperation with others, conceding to others, etc.

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We can be supportive each other when a difficult thing occurs.

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We can share the joy and pain of the other family members.

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We can naturally learn what my role and duty are in the family.

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We feel like we are much securer with a large family.

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There are negative aspects of having a big family.

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Like a proverb saying a mother with a large brood never has a peaceful day, something will happen almost every day.

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There will be a lot of conflicts.

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Especially if you have to live with your mother-in-law, the tension, disputes, or arguments will be prevalent.

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