What do you think would happen to the world if we do not stop using plastic?
학생이 쓴 원문
Probably, if we keep using plastic materials, the Earth will get sick easily. The plastic will pile up onto all mountains and oceans, all humans can not breathe and live anymore. It’s terrible! I hope it don’t happen someday, we should stop using plastic.
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>>CORRECT!
>>OR: At this rate, if we keep using plastic materials, the earth\'s condition will worsen.
2. The plastic will pile up onto all mountains and oceans, all humans can not breathe and live anymore.
>>CORRECT!
3. It’s terrible! I hope it don’t happen someday, we should stop using plastic.
>>It\'s terrible! I hope it won\'t happen someday. We should stop using plastic.
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