What do you think would South Korea be like if it still has kings and queens? Explain your answer.
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I think that the South Korea would be destroyed by ourselves.
In the past, South Korea was peaceful and still had kings and queens.
But over the time, a lot of people were being poor because of the two wars.
And when the South Korea was being poor and poor, we were colonized by Japan.
But if there were still kings and queens in here, South Korea might destroyed itself.
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Hi [이름]!
Good thing that everything worked out for the best there in South Korea.
I think that the South Korea would be destroyed by ourselves.
In the past, South Korea was peaceful and still had kings and queens.
But over the time, a lot of people were being poor because of the two wars.
And when the South Korea was being poor and poor, we were colonized by Japan.
But if there were still kings and queens in here, South Korea might destroyed itself.
>> I think that South Korea would\'ve been destroyed by ourselves.
In the past, South Korea was peaceful and still had kings and queens.
>> CORRECT
But over the time, a lot of people were being poor because of the two wars.
>> But over the time, a lot of people became poor because of the two wars.
And when the South Korea was being poor and poor, we were colonized by Japan.
>> And when it continued to happened as we were colonized by Japan.
But if there were still kings and queens in here, South Korea might destroyed itself.
>> But if there were still kings and queens in here, South Korea would\'ve been destroyed by it\'s own people.
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