What do you think would your life be when you retired?

2021-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What do you think would your life be when you retired? After retirement, I am going to do anyting and take a rest. I will do what I want to do for the meantime. And then I look second job for the elderly people. If I can work even when I am old age, I will be happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

The beginning of retirement marks the start of a new chapter, not the end of the book. And whether you’re already nearing your golden years or you’ve got plenty of time left in your career. There will be so many things to look forward to when you retire. :)

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After retirement, I am going to do anyting and take a rest.

>>After retirement, I am going to do anything I want and take a rest.

I will do what I want to do for the meantime.

>> CORRECT

And then I look second job for the elderly people.

>> And then, I will look for a second job for elderly people.

If I can work even when I am old age, I will be happy.

>> If I can still work at that age, I will be very happy.

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