What do you think would your life be when you retired? Explain your answer.

2021-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think I will move to other place that I can feel relax. And I will do my hobbies like drawing and cooking. Moreover, I will talk with my friends everyday.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

The beginning of retirement marks the start of a new chapter, not the end of the book. And whether you’re already nearing your golden years or you’ve got plenty of time left in your career. There will be so many things to look forward to when you retire. :)

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I think I will move to other place that I can feel relax.

>> I think I will move to another place where I can relax.

And I will do my hobbies like drawing and cooking.

>> I will also do my hobbies such as drawing and cooking.

Moreover, I will talk with my friends everyday.

>> CORRECT

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