What do you think you can do for yourself to help you age better with improved mobility and strength

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

How are you today? Do you feel better than yesterday?

I hope you feel great. ^^

Thank you for sending in your composition.

I totally agree with your ideas below.

It is unavoidable to get old.
So, in order to have a long life we should take good care of our health.

Health is more important than wealth.

Have a great day.
Teacher Nina

We cannot avoid getting aged and older.

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The key question is how we can maintain and at least keep our physical strength and condition from deteriorating rapidly.

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A focus should on deterring the aging process rather than on completely preventing it.

>> Did you mean: A person should focus on deterring the aging process rather than on completely preventing it.

As modern medicine and medical industry develops and advances, human’s life expectancy has dramatically increased.

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A few years ago, we talked a lot about “80” as an average age to live, but now the media and even ordinary people think about 100 years old when we make a life plan.

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However, a mere life extension is meaningless.

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People would rather choose to leave early than live on the hospital bed.

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Without a doubt, we need to think about how to live a health life.

>> Without a doubt, we need to think about how to live a healthy life.

In order to live in good health, we definetly need to exercise, breathe clean air, eat healthy foods and have a good sleep.

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>> OR: In order to live a healthy life, we definitely need to exercise, breathe clean air, eat healthy foods and have a good sleep.

We also should live without getting stressed out and maintain good relations with our family, friends, and neighbors.

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Try to be positive and smile always.

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