What do you think you\'d miss most about home if you moved abroad?

2019-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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i would miss most about my family, my mom and dad. I don\'t usually express my feelings towards them, but then i realize i should start doing that from now on. i would miss the somewhat cozy feeling of my room which no any other dorms or places could replace. also i would miss the feeling of my hometown. but to be honest i would feel much less stressed in terms of studying and social pressure. although i dont usually study hard even in korea.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]^^

I think it\'s natural to miss the people we love. :)

Anyway, have a great time this weekend^^


i would miss most about my family, my mom and dad.
>>I would miss most is my family - my mom and dad.
I don\'t usually express my feelings towards them, but then i realize i should start doing that from now on.
>>I don\'t usually express my feelings towards them, but then I realize I should start doing that from now on.
i would miss the somewhat cozy feeling of my room which no any other dorms or places could replace.
>>I\'m going to miss the rather cozy feeling in my room, which can\'t replace any other dorms or places.
also i would miss the feeling of my hometown.
>>I would also miss my hometown.
but to be honest i would feel much less stressed in terms of studying and social pressure.
>>But to be honest, you\'ll feel much less stress from studying and social pressure.
although i dont usually study hard even in korea.
>>Although I don\'t usually study hard in Korea.

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