What do you think you will be able to do in English in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hi there!
Today\'s class time passed too quickly.
Class time exceed 1 minute over.
Teacher praise to me too much.
I want expect helping teacher point out the my weakness to me.
I will follow your teaching.
I recommend song for you after long time.
The title of the song is \"A lover\'s concerto\".
Can you hear \"Kelly Chen\"\'s song? Original singer is Sarah Vaughan.
But Remake song is good too and different feeling.
Homework: What do you think you will be able to do in English in the future?
In the near future, headquarters manager will come to South Korea from France.
Then i will be able to meet them an opportunity arises.
I will introduce myself to them.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! Thank you for recommending these songs. I will listen to it tonight.
Also, I\'m praising because I want you to maintain those ones.
Until the next one!
See you in class~ ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
Today\'s class time passed too quickly.
>>CORRECT
Class time exceed 1 minute over.
>>The class time exceeds 1 minute.
Teacher praise to me too much.
>>The teacher praised me too much.
I want expect helping teacher point out the my weakness to me.
>>I want the teacher to point out my weakness.
I recommend song for you after long time.
>>I will recommend a song for you after a long time.
The title of the song is \"A lover\'s concerto\".
>>CORRECT
But Remake song is good too and different feeling.
Then i will be able to meet them an opportunity arises.
I will introduce myself to them.
Today\'s class time passed too quickly.
>>CORRECT
Class time exceed 1 minute over.
>>The class time exceeds 1 minute.
OR>>The class time was extended for 1 minute.
Teacher praise to me too much.
>>The teacher praised me too much.
I want expect helping teacher point out the my weakness to me.
>>I want the teacher to point out my weakness.
OR>>I want the teacher to tell me my weaknesses.
I will follow your teaching.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
OR>>I will follow what you are teaching.
I recommend song for you after long time.
>>I will recommend a song for you after a long time.
The title of the song is \"A lover\'s concerto\".
>>CORRECT
But Remake song is good too and different feeling.
>>But the remake song is good too and it gives a different feeling.
In the near future, headquarters manager will come to South Korea from France.
In the near future, headquarters manager will come to South Korea from France.
>>In the near future, the headquarter\'s manager will come to South Korea from France.
Then i will be able to meet them an opportunity arises.
>>Then, I will be able to meet them for a good opportunity.
I will introduce myself to them.
>>CORRECT
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