What do you think your first job will be? Why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
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Actually I didn't chose yet but I think my first job will be sport player it's mean soccer or basketball player, because I like to use my body and when I sweat it's feel is good.
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Actually I didn\'t chose yet but I think my first job will be sport player it\'s mean soccer or basketball player, because I like to use my body and when I sweat it\'s feel is good.
>> Actually, I haven\'t chosen one yet but I think my first job will be a soccer player or a basketball player because I like to use my physical strength and I feel good every time I sweat.
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