What do you think your standard of living will be like when you retire?
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Hello Su,
Thank you for doing your homework, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. It sounds like you\'re thinking about the future, which is great! Right now, thinking about the far-off future might feel a bit distant. But as time goes by, things change. When that time comes, you have a wish to do something related to your job or earn money, which is a wonderful goal. And when you retire in the future, you want to do something you love, your favorite thing. That\'s a fantastic idea! Remember, your dreams are important, and taking small steps toward them every day can make a big difference. Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Cathy
It’s too far futures to me.
>>It’s too far in the future for me.
But when maybe it’s come that time to me, i want to act one wish about doing my job or earning money.
>>But maybe when that time comes for me, I
want to fulfill a wish related to my job or earning money.
When i retire my future, i want that my favorite
thing doing for me.
>>When I retire in the future, I hope to spend time doing my favorite things.
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