what do you think your younger self would be most surprised to learn about you now?

2025-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was younger, I was very timid and I found it difficult and scary to talk about myself or speak in front of others At that time, I used to think the world is around me. I wasn\'t interested in anything But through many experiences, I\'ve become more comfortable expressing myself and I\'ve learned to pay attention to the people and situations around me. I try to stay calm and think clearly what happens- I don\'t let my emotions take over and I don\'t lose sight of who I am.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [Name]! The line \"I don\'t lose sight of who I am\" really resonated. It speaks to the kind of quiet confidence that doesn’t need to prove itself, just holds steady. That’s the kind of growth that feels real and lasting. Honestly, it sounds like you\'re becoming not just more expressive, but more grounded, too. That’s something to be proud of.

-T. Sonny

When I was younger, I was very timid and I found it difficult and scary to talk about myself or speak in front of others

>>Correct!
At that time, I used to think the world is around me.

>>At that time, I used to think the world revolved around me.

I wasn\'t interested in anything

>>I wasn’t interested in anything beyond myself.
But through many experiences, I\'ve become more comfortable expressing myself and I\'ve learned to pay attention to the people and situations around me.

>>Correct!
I try to stay calm and think clearly what happens- I don\'t let my emotions take over and I don\'t lose sight of who I am.

>>I try to stay calm and think clearly about what’s happening—I don’t let my emotions take over, and I don’t lose sight of who I am.

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