What do you typically enjoy doing on the weekends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to watching a movie in the weekends.
I love romentic movies.
And I think when I watching a foreign movies, my English is more improve.
Because I really want improve my English skill.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Gwi Young! I love watching movies too and I agree with you that it really helps improve our English skills.
--Ellaine^^
I used to watching a movie in the weekends.
>>I used to watch a movie on the weekends.
I love romentic movies.
I love romentic movies.
>>I love romantic movies.
And I think when I watching a foreign movies, my English is more improve.
And I think when I watching a foreign movies, my English is more improve.
>>And I think when I watch foreign movies, my English improves more.
Because I really want improve my English skill.
Because I really want improve my English skill.
>>Because I really want to improve my English skills.
Thank you!
Thank you!
>>Correct
OR:
>>Many thanks!
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