What do you up to this weekend?(ANSWER)
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What do you up to this weekend?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I will go to Yong In at this Sunday.
Because I have to participate at \'M Science Convergence Camp.\'
When I arrive at Yong In with my family, we will go to hotel.
We will spend a day in a hotel.
Next day, we will go to \'Yong In Folk Village.\'
Ww will watch Korean traditional houses at there, and 1\'o clock, our family
will go to Myung Ji University.
Then, I wil be alone.
It\'s a plan!
CORRECTIONS:
I will go to Yong In on
Sunday.
That is because I have to participate at M Science
Convergence Camp.
When I arrive in Yong In with my family, we will go to a hotel.
We will spend a day in a hotel.
The next day, we will go to Yong In Folk Village.
We will watch Korean traditional houses there and at 1 o’ clock,
our family will go to
Myung Ji University.
Then, I will be alone.
It\'s a plan!
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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