What do you up to this weekend?(ANSWER)

2019-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I will go to Yong In at this Sunday. Because I have to participate at 'M Science Convergence Camp.' When I arrive at Yong In with my family, we will go to hotel. We will spend a day in a hotel. Next day, we will go to 'Yong In Folk Village.' Ww will watch Korean traditional houses at there, and 1'o clock, our family will go to Myung Ji University. Then, I wil be alone. It's a plan!

강사 첨삭

  

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What do you up to this weekend?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I will go to Yong In at this Sunday.
Because I have to participate at \'M Science Convergence Camp.\'
When I arrive at Yong In with my family, we will go to hotel.
We will spend a day in a hotel.
Next day, we will go to \'Yong In Folk Village.\'
Ww will watch Korean traditional houses at there, and 1\'o clock, our family will go to Myung Ji University.
Then, I wil be alone.

It\'s a plan!

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I will go to Yong In on Sunday.
That is because I have to participate at M Science Convergence Camp.
When I arrive
in Yong In with my family, we will go to a hotel.
We will spend a day in a hotel.
The next day, we will go to Yong In Folk Village.
We will watch Korean traditional houses there and at 1 o’ clock, our family will go to Myung Ji University.
Then, I
will be alone.

It\'s a plan!

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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