What do you use to help you plan? A smartphone application? Computer software? A pen and paper?
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I always use all them. First, to use smartphone application is most useful. Because I always take a smartphone. So It\'s so easy to write my plan immediately. Second, to use computer software is so easy to modify. Finally, to use pen and paper makes me feel emotional and happy. So I can\'t give up anything.
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Hi there, Cindy!
I agree those three things are really useful in making your plans. Well, whichever is available, use them appropriately. ^^
~T. Maine
I always use all them.
>>I always use all of them.
First, to use smartphone application is most
useful.
>>First, using a smartphone application is the most useful.
Because I always take a smartphone.
>>It is because I always take my smartphone with me.
So It\'s so easy to write my
plan immediately.
>>Correct.
Second, to use computer software is so easy to modify.
>>Second, I use the computer software easily to modify my schedule.
Finally, to use pen and paper makes me feel emotional and happy.
>>Finally, I use the pen and paper because it makes me feel emotional and happy.
So I
can\'t give up anything.
>>Correct.
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