What do you usually do during the weekend?
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I had rest time with my family. And I had watched YouTube videos on movies. Also, I had lunch that we got at a store near my home with my friend.
I usually used to play a video game or screen golf game. As you know, Recently, I\'m into studying English.
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Hi, [이름]!
4. I usually used to play a video game or screen golf game.
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Here are some things to consider:
1. I had rest time with my family.
>>I had some rest time with my family.
2. And I had watched YouTube videos on movies.
>>I watched YouTube videos and movies.
3. Also, I had lunch that we got at a store near my home with my friend.
>>Also, I had lunch from what my friend and I got from a store near my home.
4. I usually used to play a video game or screen golf game.
>>I used to play a video game or screen golf game.
5. As you know, Recently, I\'m into studying English.
>>However, recently, I\'ve been studying English.
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