What do you usually do during your day off?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I go to mountain if I have day off. sometimes, I take a ride on bicycle.
Yesterday, I had a vacation for my father.
My father has no teeth, so he used full teeth which was made by dental service.
In Korea, most of persons use day off for their familly.
When it is comming the end of year, we must use my day off of all. if don\'t use it, we lost it.
So, I used my days off for my rest. but I could not use it effectively. I don\'t know how to spend my vacation with fun.
In Korea, Man always work without rest. that is duty as the head of familly. especially old man was.
Today I also would like to do the lesson 2 like in a real situation.
If you will call me today, you say \'hello\'
My reply will be \" Good evening, May I speak with Mr. [Name]?\"
Are you OK?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~ Yes, we will do the same with lesson 2. We will do it like in a real situation. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework. You did great. Keep up the good work. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
I go to mountain if I have day off. sometimes,
>> I usually go to the mountain when I have a day-off.
I take a ride on bicycle.
>> Sometimes, I take a ride on a bicycle.
Yesterday, I had a vacation for my father.
>> Yesterday, I took a day-off for my father.
>> My father has no teeth so we went to a dental clinic for his false teeth.
>> In Korea, most of the people use their day-off for their family.
>> When the year is about to end, we must use all our day-offs because if we don\'t, we won\'t be able to use them next year.
>> So, I use my day-offs to rest but I couldn\'t use them effectively.
I don\'t know how to spend my vacation with fun.
>> I don\'t know how to have fun spending my vacation.
>> CORRECT
that is duty as the head of familly.
>> That is their duty as the head of the family.
especially old man was.
>> Especially old men.
>> Today I\'d also like to do lesson 2 like in a real situation.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> Is that okay?
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