What do you usually do every fall season?
학생이 쓴 원문
All trees are beautiful in fall season. I usually go to a mountain with my family to see the trees which have different colors. There are many people very wonderful trees in Korea.
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Your answer:
All trees are beautiful in fall season. I usually go to a mountain with my family to see the trees which have different colors. There are many people very wonderful trees in Korea.
Let\'s check:
>>>All trees are beautiful in fall season. Correct
>>> I usually go to a mountain with my family to see the trees which have different colors. (Nice try)
Or you can say like this:
>> I usually go to the mountain with my family to see trees with different colors.
>>>There are many people very wonderful trees in Korea. (Nice try)
Or you can say like this:
>> There are a lot of people and there are wonderful trees in Korea.
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