What do you usually do in your free time?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually use cellphone surfacing on the internet, playing games or watching dramas in my free time, when I am at work.
In the morning, Before I start to work I usually check entertainment news on the website.
During the lunch break, after I had lunch if there is still time left I normally play games or a watch drama.
I rarely take a nap in my break time.
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- Teacher Debbie
I usually use cellphone surfacing on the internet, playing games or watching dramas in my free time, when I am at work.
>> I usually use my/a cellphone surfing the internet, playing games or watching dramas in my free time, when I am at work.
In the morning, Before I start to work I usually check entertainment news on the website.
>> In the morning, before I start to work, I usually check the entertainment news on the website.
During the lunch break, after I had lunch if there is still time left I normally play games or a watch drama.
During the lunch break, after I had lunch if there is still time left I normally play games or a watch drama.
>> During lunch break, after I had lunch and if there is still time left, I normally play games or watch a drama.
I rarely take a nap in my break time.
I rarely take a nap in my break time.
>> correct
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