What do you usually do on long holidays?
학생이 쓴 원문
Usually many people go outside at the long holiday.
So we have traffic jam and stressed.
I do not go far away at long holiday.
I usually go the restaurant or cafe in my town.
강사 첨삭
That is so true!
Usually many people go outside at the long holiday.
>> Usually, many people go outside during the long holiday.
So we have traffic jam and stressed.
>> So we have severe traffic jams and we are stressed.
I do not go far away at long holiday.
>> I do not go far away during long holidays.
I usually go the restaurant or cafe in my town.
>> I usually go to a restaurant or a cafe in my town.
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