What do you usually do on the beach? Lie down and soak up the sun or something more active?
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Hi Sir [이름]!
Wow! I suddenly want to go to the beach.
However the weather here in the Philippines is really hot.
I can\'t endure the heat wave.
I hope that you can visit the beaches here in the Philippines.
We can talk more about this in class.
See you.
Teacher Nina
I used to do water sports such as riding a banana boat, jet skiing, snorkeling, and so on when I went to beaches.
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However, I actually don’t enjoy them much because I hate the heat wave and exposing myself under the sun.
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I prefer to lie down and drink a glass of beer at the shady area like in the beach bungalow.
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I like watching people paying on the beach and the beautiful sunset or sunrise which is a breathtaking sight to see.
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You’ll never tire of.
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I can take in the day or morning and reflect on what have accomplished and how I should live.
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Walking on the beach at evening is also one of the good things you can try.
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This offers great exercise, and the water is great for cooling down.
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It’s not too hot and we can watch and hear wave is coming in and out.
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I tend to remain passive when I go to the beach.
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I don\'t have to daydream or take pictures or do anything really.
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I can just sit there and relax.
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Breathe, meditate, take a nap.
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Just be and relax.
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I’m on vacation after all!
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