What do you usually do on the beach? Lie down and soak up the sun or something more active?

2016-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I used to do water sports such as riding a banana boat, jet skiing, snorkeling, and so on when I went to beaches. However, I actually don’t enjoy them much because I hate the heat wave and exposing myself under the sun. I prefer to lie down and drink a glass of beer at the shady area like in the beach bungalow. I like watching people paying on the beach and the beautiful sunset or sunrise which is a breathtaking sight to see. You’ll never tire of. I can take in the day or morning and reflect on what have accomplished and how I should live. Walking on the beach at evening is also one of the good things you can try. This offers great exercise, and the water is great for cooling down. It’s not too hot and we can watch and hear wave is coming in and out. I tend to remain passive when I go to the beach. I don't have to daydream or take pictures or do anything really. I can just sit there and relax. Breathe, meditate, take a nap. Just be and relax. I’m on vacation after all!

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]!
Wow! I suddenly want to go to the beach.

However the weather here in the Philippines is really hot.

I can\'t endure the heat wave.

I hope that you can visit the beaches here in the Philippines.

We can talk more about this in class.

See you.

Teacher Nina


I used to do water sports such as riding a banana boat, jet skiing, snorkeling, and so on when I went to beaches.

>> correct

However, I actually don’t enjoy them much because I hate the heat wave and exposing myself under the sun.

>> correct

I prefer to lie down and drink a glass of beer at the shady area like in the beach bungalow.

>> correct

I like watching people paying on the beach and the beautiful sunset or sunrise which is a breathtaking sight to see.

>> correct

You’ll never tire of.

>> correct

I can take in the day or morning and reflect on what have accomplished and how I should live.

>> correct

Walking on the beach at evening is also one of the good things you can try.

>> correct

This offers great exercise, and the water is great for cooling down.

>> correct

It’s not too hot and we can watch and hear wave is coming in and out.

>> correct

I tend to remain passive when I go to the beach.

>> correct

I don\'t have to daydream or take pictures or do anything really.

>> correct

I can just sit there and relax.

>> correct

Breathe, meditate, take a nap.

>> correct

Just be and relax.

>> correct

I’m on vacation after all!

>> correct

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