What do you usually do on weekends?
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On weekends, I start a day by getting up late.
I want to make myself keep the morning routine, but It really hard to do it.
so It is almost lunchtime, I prepare some foods for lunch.
after lunch, I watch TV series or movies on Netflix all day.
sometimes, I go hiking or on a trip nearby with my boyfriend.
I really need to be diligent. because I always have a lot of things to do such as studying English, reading books, doing some hobbies like drawing.
I am a person who makes a plan tightly but does just a few things.
I hope that I would be a good person who keeps the daily plan.
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Thank you, [이름]! You were able to explain your thoughts vividly! I was able to understand it. Great! - Faith-
On weekends, I start a day by getting up late.>> On weekends, I start my day by getting up late.
I want to make myself keep the morning routine, but It really hard to do it.
I want to make myself keep the morning routine, but It really hard to do it.
>> I want to keep my morning routine, but it\'s really hard to do it.
so It is almost lunchtime, I prepare some foods for lunch.
so It is almost lunchtime, I prepare some foods for lunch.
>> So, when it\'s almost lunchtime, I prepare some foods for lunch.
after lunch, I watch TV series or movies on Netflix all day.
after lunch, I watch TV series or movies on Netflix all day.
>> After lunch, I spend the rest of my day watching TV series or movies on Netflix.
sometimes, I go hiking or on a trip nearby with my boyfriend.
sometimes, I go hiking or on a trip nearby with my boyfriend.
>> Sometimes, I go hiking or go on a trip nearby with my boyfriend.
I really need to be diligent. because I always have a lot of things to do such as studying English, reading books, doing some hobbies like drawing.
I really need to be diligent. because I always have a lot of things to do such as studying English, reading books, doing some hobbies like drawing.
>> I really need to be diligent because I always have a lot of things to do such as studying English, reading books, doing some hobbies like drawing.
I am a person who makes a plan tightly but does just a few things.
I am a person who makes a plan tightly but does just a few things.
>> I am a person who makes a plan tightly but only does a few things of them.
I hope that I would be a good person who keeps the daily plan.
I hope that I would be a good person who keeps the daily plan.
>> I hope that I would be a good person who keeps my daily plan.
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